So posted a screenshot of my work on my Facebook page and asked my friends to point out some problems with my poster so I am able to fix them before I hand in my work as a 2nd persons point of view on it really dose help me improve or in this case 34 other people. So a few comments like ‘will we get faces?’ which I thought I could add but then came to the conclusion of not adding the faces on because that would take the attention of what i’m trying to express in my poster that is the thought that we are a network also the fact it would over complicate it all. Another one of my friends didn’t like the fact her hair was better than in real life but this was due to taking a image when she 1st dyed her hair and she may have edited the photo. And Lastly the Typo I did…. Okay I’m not good at spelling but its a good thing i placed this online or I would have handed that in like that as I honestly wouldn’t have known the difference. So as soon my friend pointed this out to me I then soon changed it ASAP!! and then it all all fine.
A few comments weren’t helpful and others was just positive feedback but a few was helpful such as the ones above. So the 1st issue that came up a lot was the background issue which I also agree with.. but Is it too blue? So after this I tried the colour black so it would stand out, but this was too blunt and not nice…. I then added a circler gradient which did make it better but still didn’t look good. I then tried it with White but this was a defiantly a No due to not being able to see my trunk anymore, in order to see the trunk I added a black gradient but this still don’t look good. I then went back to blue but darker but it don’t have the same approach as the light blue so I was back to the beginning although one comment did say the blue on blue works and I thinking why cant it work? but still may not be the right shade.